Preface: I'm not calling anyone out, just providing examples. It seems to me the first edit notice was not read, hence this post, which hopefully will also help others.
Tag excerpts are not meant to be just definitions, or cute definitions. So kindly if you will suggest an edit, make sure it is professional, so the reviewers don't have to do all the work. Make sure it's about the usage.
Two examples I recently rejected and edited:
✘ obstacle-clearance Questions about the art of staying high enough to keep from running into things sticking up from the ground, and the procedures used to accomplish this.
✔ obstacle-clearance For questions on obstacle clearance, whether en route or on a procedure (departure and arrival), including the operational and regulatory aspects.
✘ pilot-fatigue Questions about sleepy pilots and the procedures put in place to keep them out of the cockpit.
✔ pilot-fatigue For questions on pilot fatigue, and the associated risk management and regulations.
For more guidance, please see: https://stackoverflow.blog/2011/03/24/redesigned-tags-page/ In particular:
- Avoid generically defining the concept behind a tag, unless it is highly specialized
- Concentrate on what a tag means to your community
- Provide basic guidance on when to use the tag